以下为《高考英语作文题型及对策——如何改写、缩写等》的无排版文字预览,完整格式请下载
下载前请仔细阅读文字预览以及下方图片预览。图片预览是什么样的,下载的文档就是什么样的。
高考英语作文题型及对策
——如何改写、缩写等
缩写是在保留原文体载、题材、主要内容、结构顺序,人称角度的前提下概括原文内容、压缩篇幅使之成为一篇内容简明、语言简练、中心突出的短文。缩写时须把握的一个原则是:我们要对原文内容高度概括,而不是对原文内容的改写或评论、议论,因此切不可添加自己的主观看法、发表自 议论。如果上一原则不可随意加,那么与此相关的另一原则是不可随意减。缩写时一定要准确完整地把握原文,主干枝叶分清楚,有关主题的主干切不可任意肢解删减,我们要删去或简写的是无关大局的细节,切不可随便摘取其中部分要点了事。
缩写要注意语言。首先,要在准确理解原文的基础上,对原文要点用自己的话进行改写(paraphrase),不要在原文中生硬摘取连缀成某某。如一篇原文中有这样的描写:We moved out of the city slowly behind a long line of cars, but at last we came to a quiet country road and after some time, stopped at the lonely farm这么长的句子说明了一个事实:路上出游的车很多,得过很久才能找到一个安静的地方。我们可用自己的话表达原句:There were a lot of cars on the road so it took us a long time to find a quiet place. 或We spent so much time finding a quiet place, for there were so many cars on the road. 其次,缩写语言要简练。我们可以将多个简单句变成一个紧凑的复合句。如:Newton thought about so many problems that he was often absentminded. he frequently forgot to have his meals. 一句可以紧缩为Newton was so absentminded that he often forgot to have his meals. 使语言简练的另一手段是将小句(clause)变成短语。如:When the child saw his mother, he cried loudly. 可变为Seeing his mother, the child cried loudly. 再如,As far as the weather is concerned. 可简化成as for the weather等等。
改写是在保持原文主体内容的基础上进行的。改的方面可以是体裁、人称、语言、结构等。比较常见的如在短文与对话之间改写。改写应意以下几点。
首先,要保持原文基本内容不变,在些基础上可进行细节添加或删减。例如“看病”这一题材若以对话形式出现就少不了医生对病人说的专业性用语,如:What’s the matter with you? How are you feeling?等,而在商店出现的对话就少不了售货员的行业用语,如:What can I do for you?等,它们在被改写短文时是要被删除的,因为它们只是进入正式活动的引入语。当然同类题材的短文改写成对话时要顾及到它们所起的作用。有些改写需在写作中想象某些情节,这一点常出现在转换人称角度的作文中。添加内容时,一定要注意切题,根据上下文做合情合理的设想。
其次,短文与对话进行改写时要注意语 内容过长,仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览,全文请查看图片预览。 ine and told him to work less hard.
But the businessman grew even worse. He saw the doctor once again. At last the doctor discovered that the businessman’s servant gave him sleeping medicine in the morning and the medicine that kept him awake in the evening by mistake.
——艾斯英语听力
[文章尾部最后300字内容到此结束,中间部分内容请查看底下的图片预览]
以上为《高考英语作文题型及对策——如何改写、缩写等》的无排版文字预览,完整格式请下载
下载前请仔细阅读上面文字预览以及下方图片预览。图片预览是什么样的,下载的文档就是什么样的。