素材01 学校相关(解析版)-六年(-)高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累

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素材01 学校相关

【话题分析】

指在校学习的课程,学校、班级或学生会等举行的各项比赛或课外活动,包括聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动;也包括学生的穿着、发型,还包括预习、复习、讨论、归纳等学习活动或教师的教学方法。

命题者可能会要求考生就某项比赛或课外活动等写一份通知,或就具体的聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动写一份通知或写活动后的日记。

可能要求考生就学生的穿着、发型、行为举止等发表看法;就预习、复习、讨论、归纳等课堂学习活动和教师教学方法等发表看法;就学生对任课教师开展评教活动发表看法;学校在节假日该不该补课;学生该不该参加校外各种形式的特长训练,如钢琴培训、外语培训、勤工俭学等。

【素材积累】

一.话题常用单词

1.?campus??n.?校园???

2.?playground??n.?操场?

3.?laboratory/lab??n.?实验室?

4.?dining?hall??n.?食堂?

5.?dormitory??n.?宿舍??????

6.?club??n.?俱乐部?

7.?teaching?building教学楼?

8.?the?Students’?Union学生会

?9.?achievement/result成绩?

10.?marks/grades/scores分数?

11.?hobby?n.?爱好,嗜好?

12.?volunteer?n.?志愿者?

13.?learning?habits?学习习惯?

14.?the?class?meeting?班会?

二.话题常用短语???

1.?prepare?for/preview?lessons预习功课???

?2.?review/go?over?lessons??复习功课?

??review?what?you?have?learned?复习已学知识?

3.listen?to?the?teachers?attentively?in?class??上课认真听讲?

4.?stay?away?from?school旷课??

5.?work?hard?at?English?努力学习英语???????

6.?put?one’s?heart?into专心于?

7.?concentrate?on?全神贯注;专心于

?8.?be?absorbed?in/be?buried?in?专心于……

9.?take?notes?做笔记?

10.?refer?to?the?reference?books?查阅参考书??

?11.?turn?to?the?teachers?for?help向老师求助?

12.?learn...by?heart/keep...?in?mind?记住?

13.?work?out?a?problem解决一个?问题

14.?make?progress?in?...?在……方面取得进步?

15.?improve?oneself?in...在某方面提高自己?

16.?have?a?good?command?of?English?精通英语?

17.?be?interested?in??对……感兴趣

18.?lose?interest?in?对……失去兴趣?

19.?be?good?at/do?well?in擅长……

20.?be?poor?at/be?weak?in不擅长……

21.?be?tired?of?study?对学习感到厌倦?

22.?major?in...?主修……

23.?be?busy?in?preparing?for?the?exam忙着为考试做准备?

24.?be?well?prepared?for?the?test?为考试做好了准备

?25.?take?the?test/exam?参加考试

?26.?pass?the?examination通过考试?

27.?fail(in)the?exam?考试不及格???

28.?get?full?marks?(for.)..得满分??????????????????

29.?cheat?in?the?exam考试作弊?

30.?win?the?first?prize?in?the?English?speech?

contest?获得英语演讲比赛第一名?

31.?be?active?in?class?积极参与课堂?

32.?take?an?active?part?in?group?discussion.?

积极参加小组讨论?

33.?after-school?activities课外活动?

34.?carry?out?social?investigations做社会调查

35.?take?part?in?voluntary?work参加义务劳动?

36.?join?in?physical?activities参加体育活动??

37.?do?social?practice?做社会实践????????

38.?have?part-time?jobs?做兼职?

39.?have?a?picnic/barbecue去野餐/烧烤???????

40.?hold?a?sports?meeting举行运动会???????

41.?live?up?to?one’s?hope?不辜负某人的期望?

42.?broaden?one’s?horizons开拓视野?

43.?enrich?one’s?knowledge?丰富知识?

44.enrich?our?school?life?丰富我们的校园生活?

45.?the?best?way?to?improve?reading?skills?

提高阅读技能的最好方法?

46.?release?one’s?pressure?释放压力?

47.?relax?oneself?放松身心?

48.?increase?the?pleasure?of?life增加生活乐趣?

49.?graduation?ceremony?毕业典礼??????

50.?have?trouble?in?learning?English学习英语有困难?

51.be?admitted?into?your?ideal?university考上理想的大学?

52.?take?a?break?between?classes课间休息

53.take?exercise?锻炼身体?

???do?some?exercises?做练习题?

54.?graduate?from?high?school?高中毕业?

55.?work?as?a?volunteer?担任志愿者

三、参考语句·话题常用句型?

1.?Where?there?is?a?will,?there?is?a?way有志者事竟成。

?2.?you?are?never?too?old?to?learn?活到老学到老?

3.?No?pains,?no?gains不劳无获?

4.?Practice?makes?perfect.孰能生巧。?

5.?Confidence?is?the?key?to?success自信是成功的关键?

6.?Only?if?you?work?hard?can?you?succeed?in?the?contest.只有你努力了,你才能在比赛中获胜。?

7.?The?after-school?activity?is?a?necessary?part?of?our?school?life?.课外活动是我们学校生活不可缺少的一部分。

?8.?When?you?are?faced?with?difficulty,?never?lose?heart/give?up.面临困难时,千万不要灰心/放弃?

9.In?order?to?encourage?the?students?to?take?outdoor?exercise,?our?school?will?organize?a?

mountain-climbing?on?April?

为了鼓励学生参加课外活动,我们学校将在4月10日组织一次登山轰动?

10.?I?am?writing?to?invite?you?to?take?part?in?the?activity.?我写信是为了邀请你参加这次活动。

11.?The?activity?will?be?held?on?the?playground?from?8:30?a.m?to?10:30?a.m.?next?Friday.?本次活动将于下周五8:30—10:30在操场上举行。?

12.?The?activity?benefited?us?a?lot.?=?we?benefited?a?lot?from?the?activity.?

这次活动让我受益颇多。?

13.?Not?only?did?the?activity?get?us?close?to?nature?and?give?us?relaxation?from?heavy?school?work,?but?also?it?promoted?the?friendship?among?us.这次活动不仅使我们接近大自然,从繁重的学习中得到放松,而且也促进我们之间的友谊。

14.A child poor at math may be talented for painting.一个数学差的小孩,可能是艺术天才。

15.I prefer to fail rather than cheat in the exam.我宁愿考不及格,也不愿意考试作弊。

16.The extracurricular activity is a necessary part of the school lives.课外活动是学校生活不可缺少的一环。

【典例分析】

(2019年新课标全国卷III)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:

1.时间;

2.活动安排;

3.欢迎他表演节目。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【试题趋势】

跟去年类似,今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况 (属音乐活动范畴)。近年来,书面表达的考查越来越贴近中学生的日常生活,更加重视语言的应用,回归了英语作为语言功能的本质。因此,在备考时,要集中看一些与日常生活和学习息息相关的话题,如学校生活、体育运动、语言学习、节假日及活动等,并密切关注社会时事,按照话题网络化复习,效果会更佳。

【写作指导】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。

第二,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。

第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

邀请信注意事项

1. 审题:要点齐全,兼顾细节

2. 开头:简洁明了,直入主题

3. 行文:语言准确,语气恰当

4. 个人介绍+写作目的(I am writing to …)

5. 文章细节(时间、地点、活动内容、参加理由)

6. 再次邀请(希望)+联系方式

邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,包含以下几个方面:

1. 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点

2. 与该活动有关的注意事项

找到“中心/要点”— 在文章中应该注意“中心贯穿全文”

3. 期待对方接受邀请,并可表示感谢。

【必备佳句】

【篇首句】介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。

1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School,the president of the Student Union.

我是来自育文学校的王明,学生会主席。

2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.

我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。学科&网

3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.

周日,在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。

4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.

我想邀请你做它的裁判。

5. I’m writing to invite you to...

我写信是邀请你……

6. I wonder if you can come to...

我想知道你是否能来……

7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.

我们真诚希望你能够参加。

8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...

我很荣幸的邀请你……

9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?

很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六,在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗?

【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理由。

1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.

它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。

2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.

我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。

3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.

下午,我们会一起……

4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.

记得带上水和午餐。

5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.

顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。

6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.

我知道你的母语是英语,还是一个英语老师。我,代表我们学校,真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。

7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.

既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。

8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.

我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。

【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。

1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at *** at your earliest convenience.

那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话***。

2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?

请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗?

3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。

4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。

5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。

【参考范文】

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

内容过长,仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览,全文请查看图片预览。 out some possible grammatical mistakes and polish the article for me?

I would appreciate it if you could help me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【写作策略】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Henry写一封邮件,让他帮忙给你的文章修改润色。

1.词汇积累

帮忙:lend sb. a hand→do sb. a favor

参与:participate in→take part in

组织:organise/arrange→hold

主题,话题:topic→theme

激发:motivate→inspire

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:I have written an article and I need your help.

拓展句:I have written an article, which will be impressive if you give me some help.

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