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On behalf of the department manager, write an email to a new staff Mary to

1)welcome her, and2)inform her about the detail.You should write about 100 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name.Use"Li Ming”instead. Do not write your address.(10 points)

同学你好，作文已批改如下：

请在改正错误之后，进行记背。

Dear Mary,

I am one of your workmates. On behalf of our department manager, I am particularly delighted to hear that you will work with us together. Welcome to our company!

I， the manager of the department that you will join， particularly delighted to hear that you accepted the offer of our company. And I am writing to extend my heartfelt welcome to you and inform you of some details.

First of all, I intend to tell you that it is advisable for you to arrive at our company before 8 o’clock a.m. since the manager is not satisfied with an employee who will be late at first time. And it will give us a good impression. Second, it is better for you to wear the formal clothes. what I want to mention else is that you’d better wear formal clothes. In addition, I hope that you will be comfortable when you get on with us. Don’t be anxious. I sincerely hope that you are comfortable in our company and feel free to tell me if you have any question.

I am looking forward to your arrival.

Yours, sincerely

Li Ming

同学，你好！作文需要再注意句型的升级，因为目前你写的是简单句居多，所以可以课后多去复习从句知识，把简单句整合一下，写的复杂一点，这样才能取得一个不错的分数。同时，一些句型也可以记下来，比如表建议的，表要求的等的。

题目解析：

欢迎信考察的是语气，需要以期待、积极的语气来完成作文，同时要把入职须知尽可能简单的通知到对方。

基础必背知识：

建议信

开头常用句式 内容过长，仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览，全文请查看图片预览。 lcome to the team. We look forward to having you come on board.

Regards,

Li Ming

Department Manager

范文翻译：

亲爱的玛丽:

这个便条是想告诉你,我们部门所有人对于你接受职位邀请感到非常高兴。非常欢迎你加入到我们团队。

我们希望你在5月8号(周二)上午9点钟来进行新员工培训。你会与人力资源部的同事见面,了解一些入职相关的事宜。你还会见到几个同事,这样你会对我们部门的整体工作有一个了解。这里对着装的要求是商务休闲装。

再次欢迎你来到这个团队。我们期待你的加入。

祝某某!

部门经理

李某某

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