二轮复习专题:应用文突破之发言稿(教师版)

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二轮复习专题:应用文突破之发言稿(教师版)

---基于交际对象的应用文五步提升

发言稿是怎样的类型,主要考察什么?历年高考真题发言稿考察哪些方面?

发言稿是演讲者在一定的场合,面对特定的对象,为了达到某种目的而采取的表达自己观点的文字,是高考中较为常见的应用文。

一般说来,演讲稿包括欢迎(送)性和宣读性两种类型。前者属于在正式场合接待或欢送客人时,主人为了表达欢迎、感谢或祝愿而进行的热情友好的发言。此类发言稿通常包含礼节性语言和有关的人物或事情(如旅游路线、学校概况等)的情况介绍两部分内容。后者属于向听众讲述一些道理,其目的在于希望对方接受自己的见解。此类发言稿通常综合了说明、议论、叙述等写作手法。演讲稿是介绍性说明文,在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。在写作时,应注意用词得体,符合场合和语境。

学生容易发生的问题是:

简单句太多;

固定搭配出错和单词拼写错误或者词性出错;

语言结构较简单,语言不地道,词汇句子缺乏亮点;

缺乏逻辑思维意识,边写边想,言而无序

要怎样得到高分?

包含所有要点

2. 准确运用较为丰富的词汇和语法

3. 逻辑清晰,运用恰当衔接手段

4. 格式正确,标点符号不出错

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分为几个方面展开?

1. 发言稿常用句型和话题词汇

2. 发言稿亮点词汇和句子

3. 发言稿应用文写作

4. 学生作文及点评反思

5. 高考真题或模拟题

6. 发言稿猜题

学生学完本节的具体收获是什么?

1. 积累发言稿相关词汇和句型表达

2. 掌握发言稿的文章布局及格式

3. 能根据题干信息,有针对性的展开要点

4. 润色升华所写内容

温馨高分应用文发言稿备考提示:

1. 要点全面覆盖

2. 结构清晰紧凑

3. 语言得体适切

4. 逻辑清晰,衔接恰当

I.发言稿常用句型和话题词汇

常用句型和范例

①On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you.

我谨代表我们学校向你们表示热烈的欢迎。

②Please allow me, on behalf of all the students, to extend our cordial welcome to our friends from New Zealand.

请允许我代表全体学生向来自新西兰的朋友们表示诚挚的欢迎。

③ We feel it a great honor to have you here with us during your stay in China.

在中国逗留期间,您能与我们在一起,我们感到非常荣幸。

④I would like to briefly introduce the arrangements.

我想简单介绍一下这些安排。

⑤The following are the activities we have arranged during your stay in our school.

以下是您在我们学校期间我们安排的活动。

⑥show sb. around the campus 带某人参观校园

⑦take part in varieties of activities 参加各种各样的活动

⑧get a general impression of our school 大致了解我们学校

⑨offer… a platform where you can… 提供一个……的平台

⑩get a taste of traditional Chinese culture 品味中国文化

2.亮点词汇和句子

①I want to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.(It's my great honor to...it作形式主语)

It's my great honor to be here to share my experience of learning English on the Internet.

②I’d be happy to tell you about my experiences.(It's a pleasure to...it作形式主语)

It is a pleasure for me to share my experiences.

③When I am free, I often talk with foreigners on the Internet using instant messaging or online forums. It is useful for me.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)

When I am free, I often communicate with native speakers in real-time using instant messaging or online forums, which makes contributions to my spoken and written English.

④I agree to study English online. (agree换成高级词汇)

I approve of / am strongly in favor of learning English online.

⑤I want to welcome more students to share their useful advice and valuable experience.(换成高级词汇)

I would like to express my heartfelt thanks and warmest welcome to more students to share their useful advice and valuable experience.

⑥Reading English news on the Internet is really helpful to improve my English and broaden my horizens.(not only...but also...倒装句)

Not only is reading English news online of great significance to improve my written English, but also it broadens my horizens.

⑦Work together, and we can make the future better.(现在分词作状语)

Working together, we can make the future better.

⑧Our English party is coming.Its aim is to improve our English and our intrest in it.(连成一句,用with the purpose of)

Our English party is around the corner, with the purpose of accelarate our English and our intrest in it.

⑨It is known to us all that exercising regularly and keeping a balanced diet benefit our health greatly.(利用高级句型There is no denying that...)

There is no denying that exercising regularly and keeping a balanced diet is of great benefit to our health.

⑩In order to make our friendship better, we will organize some activities for you,including a party and some ball games. (换成高级词汇)

Aimed at promoting our friendship, various activities will be arranged for you, ranging from a party to some ball games.

III.发言稿写作

【题文】

(2021年1月浙江)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:

1.表示欢迎;

2.介绍活动安排;

3. 表达祝愿。

注意:

1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

学生构思(审题、构思、润色+词汇升级+句型操练+句子拓展练习)

【审题谋篇】

一审确定文体:该篇要求写 发言稿(欢迎辞)。

二审确定对象:新西兰学生

3. 三审确定主体时态:主要以 一般现在,一般将来 时态为主。

4. 四审内容要点:1.表示欢迎;2.介绍活动安排;3. 表达祝愿。

5. 五审层次逻辑:三段式 Para 1: (写作背景)+ 写作目的

Para 2: 活动介绍

Para 3: 表达祝愿+感谢

【遣词造句】

学生自主列出词句

【作文点评】

中等作文习作呈现(9-10)

Dear friends,

?????? I’m really happy to express our warme welcome to you !First, let me introduce our school to you , my foreign friends.

As we all know, our school is famous for its remarkable academic achievements. To?welcome?you,?our school has arranged a lot of activities?for?your?two-day?visit?here. Firstly, our opera club members can’t wait to put on their latest opera, Qu Yuan, a well-known Chinese ancient poet and?scholar. It is highly recommended that you should take a look at our creative scientific research. Finally, we?would?like?to?show?you?around?our?school.

???? Wish you a pleasant trip here!

教师点评:

该生作文要点齐全,层次合理,语言简洁。但是文章衔接语言较少,且语言相对简单,缺乏有高度的句型结构等。

高分作文习作呈现(12+)

Honorable British guests, dear teachers and fellow students,

Please allow me, on behalf of all the teachers and students in our school, to extend a warm welcome to our honorable guests from NewZealand.

During your stay at our school, we will first show you around to give you a general idea of how our school works. Then, we will carry out our joint project on environment protection together. We’ve also arranged a football match to promote our friendship. Last but not least, you will be taken to several Chinese host families, where you can try delicious traditional Chinese food.

We hope that these activities enable you to experience a different culture, and we also hope to learn about yours. We wish you a pleasant stay at our school.

教师点评:

该生作文内容完整,思路清晰,层次分明,语言简洁,语气真诚。此外,该生在作文中尽量地使用了一些比较高级的句型和词汇,为文章增添亮点,显示了很高的英语驾驭能力。

高分作文、高分作文条目式标准

审题仔细,结构合理

发言稿是高考书信应用文中的其中一种,演讲者在一定的场合,面对特定的对象,为了达到某种目的而采取的表达自己观点的文字,是高考中较为常见的应用文。



精准用词,覆盖要点

表达推荐理由时,语气礼貌,真诚,并尊重对方。不必一味追求复杂词汇,重点在于推荐理由合情合理,多列几点,避免重复,增加说服力。平时注重词汇的精准积累,自然表达要点。



丰富句式,语法正确

精彩句子是一篇优秀发言稿应用文的“支柱”。精彩的句子体现在:(1)句式多样,包括名词性从句、定语从句、倒装句、It句式等复杂长句与短句的交替使用,非谓语动词的运用、拟人、比喻等多种修辞手法的合理使用;(2)较少语法错误,要求平时练习与积累时精准记忆,多接触原汁原味阅读素材拒绝中式英语。



合理想像,体现素养

演讲稿是介绍性说明文,在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。在写作时,应注意用词得体,符合场合和语境。





【范文展示】

Dear friends,

On behalf of our school, I feel it a great honor to express our warm welcome and briefly introduce the arrangements.

As scheduled, you’ll first be shown around our campus to have a general impression of it. The next day, to have you get a taste of Chinese traditional culture, several activities will be arranged, ranging from visiting a paper-cutting exhibition to appreciating the art of Chinese calligraphy. Then follows a get-together in our canteen, where we’ll enjoy Chinese cuisine of different flavors.

Wish you a pleasant stay here! Thank you.

【总结归纳】

1.代表…

on behalf of

representing…

as a representative of…

2.表示欢迎

Welcome to…!

express/extend one’s warm/cordial welcome

3.感到荣幸

feel honored to…

feel it an honor to…

4.介绍活动安排

introduce the arrangements

5.按照日程安排

As scheduled,...

6.受益于

benefit from

7.参观校园

show sb. around the campus

8.品尝中国美食

taste delicious Chinese cuisine

9.欣赏中国书法

appreciate the art of Chinese calligraphy

10.学写汉字

learn basic Chinese characters

【升级拓展】

I’m really happy to express our warm welcome to you !

I feel it a great honor to express our cordial welcome.

To?welcome?you,?our school has arranged a lot of activities?for?your?two-day?visit?here.

Aimed at promoting our friendship, various activities will be arranged for you, ranging from a party to some ball games.

3. Finally, we?would?like?to?show?you?around?our?school.

In the end, we are pleased to show?you?around our campus,which will help you get a general impression of our school

IV.发言稿高考真题

(2014陕西卷)假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

写作要点:

1.表示对客人的欢迎;

2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);

3.表达对客人的祝愿。

写作要求:

1.词数不少于100;

2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear American guests,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Dear American Guest,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm wel 内容过长,仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览,全文请查看图片预览。 an expert in Confucianism , Mr Wang has accumulated a great amount of knowledge of traditional Chinese culture. Our lecture, themed at “ Knowing more about Confucian and Confucianism”, will witness Mr Wang’s fantastic showcase and illustration with easy and humorous tone. I bet you will enjoy a big feast of our gorgeous culture.

Now , please welcome Mr Wang with our thunderous applause.

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